While studying an alien spellform, Twilight makes the most important discovery of all time... The one which could doom her planet. | Horror Rationalfic with Lovecraftian & World of Darkness elements. Deconstruction / Subversion of Displaced.
[Rationalfic Deconstruction / Subversion of Displaced] You’ve read the stories of people from Earth being “Displaced”: Their bodies are changed, their minds are warped, and they’re thrown across the multiverse, to whatever world and timeline their supernal "Displacers" decide upon. Well, this story isn’t one of them...
...because when they tried to remake me, I didn’t let them.
A Rationalist Horror story, in which an Occultist from some version of Earth (implied to be the World of Darkness) undermines her own Displacement and ends up as a Self-Modifying Construct. Scientific Inquiry, Philosophical Debate, Rational Discussion, Body Horror, and Existential Hijinks ensue. Themes, Concepts, and Style inspired by HP Lovecraft, Elizer Yudkowsky, Gordon R Dickson, Edgar Allen Poe, Modern Prometheus (Frankenstein), Dresden Codak, World of Darkness, and Friendship is Optimal. Front page on JUL 28th, AUG 12th, OCT 30, and every update after that.
Your story breaks the shitty norm that most displaced stories have in common by being an 'actually interesting story' instead of a powertrip for a horny teen.
This is like brain porn. My head hurts but in a good way.
Author’s Notes
I often find Displaced fics to be more often Miss than Hit with me. Often, they're generic, poorly written, or just do not do anything worth reading with the concept. This is an experiment to trt out a few other concepts which aren’t used often, even by me, including some which directly subvert Displaced as a genre, and maybe even come up with some advice for those authors. This is also a crossover with the upcoming Dragon: The Oroboroi Chronicles, a World of Darkness rulebook which I lead the development team for.
I hope you all enjoy this, and I implore you to leave some feedback in the comments section: I'll experimenting with a few uncommon concepts here, and I'd like to know how people feel about how they're coming across. :3
FAQ
Because people keep bringing these things up...
Horror/Dark Tags
I've had multiple people ask "how bad does it get?" Note the lack of the "gore", "sad", or "mature" tags or anything like that. Yes, there is blood and death at some point in this story, but the real horror of this story comes from the philosophical and scientific quandaries the characters go through: this is "intellectual horror", not "visceral horror".
Length
In the interest of this NOT becoming one of those long, sprawling fics, I plan to keep this limited to a manageable 10 chapter limit, not counting Prologue and Epilogue. No one wants to read something that long, and I'd rather not be stressing over this 6 months from now.
Sequel
The Sequel is already in the works, with scenes already written. It will be a more episodic story revolving around world optimization and interplanar hijinks.
Crossovers
To be clear, I do plan on having the main character make one of those "Token" things, but as they often get in the way of actual stories, that won't happen until the end of the story. The Sequel will be crossover-heavy.
A Special Operative gets stranded in a strange unfamiliar world and must learn how to cope.
James Kaughn is a member of the world's most elite fighting force, but when his team is sent in to rescue a captive family in Afghanistan the mission hits a snag. He stays behind to allow the others to escape, fully expecting to die, but ends up in an unfamiliar place. Join him as he meets new challenges and struggles with his worsening PTSD. Will he be able to actually make friends and not just teammates?
A human with greek heritage is "lucky" enough to get a wish granted by no other than the Gods of the Olympus. His wish is granted, but the gods put their own little twist on it.
On a fateful night, Alex wins the divine lottery and is approached by Hermes, an Olympian god. He is promised one wish, whatever it may be.
Alas, the encounter doesn't quite work out like he hoped it would.
Alex finds himself thrown into a world that is wholly unfamiliar to him. Gone are his dreams of meeting the mane six. He doesn't even have the luxury of keeping his human form.
Having to deal with an unfamiliar surrounding and a new body, this story follows him on his way to find his own place in this alien world.
Character tags will be added as they become relevant. Teen rating is mostly for some bloody scenes. (nothing too gory). Also, the prologue plays far off in the future of this story and we won't be returning to that point in quite some time.
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“Do Humans Hibernate?” Rainbow has a question on her mind. She's not entirely sure why it's bothering her so much. It probably doesn't help that the only human she could ask is the world's greatest liar. [COMPLETE STORY]
“Do Humans Hibernate?” Rainbow has a question on her mind. She's not entirely sure why it's bothering her so much. It probably doesn't help that the only human she could ask is the world's greatest liar.
Cover art by Pusspuss this random guy called ‘Pen Mightier’ who probably wishes he is Pusspuss but isn’t.
Marshal: (mɑː.ʃəl) noun….etymology - archaic: Middle English, from Anglo-French ‘mareschal’, of Germanic origin; akin to Old High German ‘marahscalc’, from ‘marah’ (horse) + ‘scalc’ (servant). Originally referring to "a person in charge of the upkeep of horses or stable hand”. The station became a position of trust and power in medieval courts and went on to acquire its modern military usage.
Twilight needs your help with a special project: taming her new pet Trixie. Only Anonymous' strong, human hands will do for pony-sex punishment...
Mommy-Domme-Sexy-Librarian!Twilight enlists Anon/Leo's help in subjugating an over-teased and helpless Trixie in a shed on the outskirts of Ponyville. After proper assistant/sub-slut introductions, Twilight busts out a new invention—the My Little Cockring™, capable of helping anyone hold off from properly busting a nut until their Mistress Mare says so!
A commission for Anonymous.
Content Warning: BDSM with emphasis on D/s, human x pony, orgasm denial, general naughtiness
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It's not every day a pony asks for sex in the middle of battle, especially one this cute.
Doomie, like most of his brothers, hasn't eaten in a while. So, when a random pink pony asks for him to "do her" and intercourse love is the tastiest kind of love out there, and the pony herself looks pretty pretty: How could he refuse?
Author's diary: DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAR diary. There is not enough Doomie pie fanfics out there....That is all.
Spike is excited to find he has a place in Ponyville other than as a personal assistant. But after being turned down, he discovers Twilight hasn't exactly been forthcoming with how ponies really see him.
Spike has lived with ponies his whole life, from the very moment he opened his eyes. After experience with his own kind, he's consistently chosen ponies over other dragons. They're his friends, his colleagues, his companions.
But Spike is getting older now, and taking notes and organizing papers isn't the way he plans on spending a dragon's lifespan. He is thrilled to discover there are plenty of ponies who appreciate his talents.
But then he gets his first rejection, and he discovers that even the ponies close to him had different ideas of his place in the world.
Written as a Patreon reward for Vilken666. Proofreading by Two Bit and Sparktail, and cover by Zutcha.
While Rainbow Dash's mother is out shopping, Dash gets bored and looks to her father to entertain her. Caught in the act, he must give Rainbow Dash a reason not to say anything about what she saw.
Hearth's Warming is just around the corner, and Rainbow Dash's mother is out shopping for the occasion. Rainbow Dash is heart-breakingly bored at home and decided to see if her dad wants to play with her. She catches her dad doing something she's never seen before. In order to keep her quiet, he decides to show her just why she shouldn't tell Mommy.
Contains: Father/Daughter Incest, Minor Cumflation, and foalcon. Your only warning.
Ginger Snap raises money for the Filly Scouts in a conventional way with unconventional, intimate incentives. You get to experience these incentives firsthand.
In an effort to increase community participation and to further their goals, the Filly Scouts have opened up a donation drive that they call Helpful Hooves. 100% of donations earned via the drive go towards other helpful organizations in the community, such as those that provide food for ponies who need it, or education, and so on. Each filly is encouraged to do whatever they wish to facilitate donations, so long as they improve the community with whatever they do.
You only know of this donation drive because Ginger Snap, an excitable young scout, tells you about it. So after some wheedling, you figure why not; you’ll donate. It’s a good cause.
She thanks you very, very personally for your generous donation.
TAGS: Foalcon, blowjob, second person (stallion), deepthroat, filly masturbation, (technical) prostitution, dirty talk, ‘community service’, donation ‘incentives’
Cover art by SoulCentinel/VioletEchoes. Full version on their IB and Derpibooru. This short story is also inspired by (part of) the full piece.
You snuggle with the adorable pegasus twins Flitter and Cloudchaser!
Heading home to Ponyville Castle after a long day of snuggling Applejack at her farm, you are accosted by an adorable little pegasus mare who demands snuggles. When her sister comes home, you find yourself having to snuggle with her, too... The seventh story in the 'Snuggles' series (it is not necessary to read any of the others in order to enjoy this one!). The others are: Seraphic Snuggles Scholarly Snuggles Prismatic Snuggles Shadowy Snuggles Sunlit Snuggles Direct Sequel to: Rustic Snuggles
Petunia Paleo is used to being covered in grime, but you've got a bone she's never seen before.
Petunia Paleo is a nine year old filly living in downtown Ponyville, mostly digging up ditches in her pursuits to discover rare unearthed bones of historical creatures. You, on the other hand, are some guy who gets stuck in one of her holes, which sucks at first, until you realize that when her parents aren't home for the night, there's another hole worth getting stuck in.
Story response to the UN's recent discussions on banning artwork depicting underaged characters. Please help support the cause!
Featured on Feb. 24, 2019. Thank you all for your help!
When a brony makes a wish to change the world it turns out a whole lot differently that he expected
When a college brony on a camping trip makes a wish on a shooting star, it turns out far differently than expected. Now this man turned dragon will find the there is much more to the world than the land of Equestria.
Twilight Sparkle looks at her friends' dreams. What could go wrong?
Twilight Sparkle has just completed her latest magical achievement: An amulet that lets her look into the dreams of other ponies! However, she needs empirical data before she can brand it a success and report to Princess Celestia! Join Twilight Sparkle as she embarks on an insane adventure of the subconscious kind! Will her amulet work? And what will she find?
It's time to dream a little dream with Twilight Sparkle!
Dusk Shine is sent to Ponyville to discover what is friendship. But could a colt that doesn't recognize the friendship, recognize love?
Another story about Dusk Shine and his Harem, but with my personal touch, with more humor, romance and adventure.
ps: This story contains some drawings made by me. It's not a comic, each chapter has one or two sketches showing some particular fact from each chapter.
What came before the country of Equestria? A tale of revenge and bonds of loyalty.
A Man. He hungers for vengeance from a time when the world including Equestria was still primal. It was before Celestia and Luna graced it with utopian peace and harmony. What if every thing about their rule is built on the bones of other civilizations? What if those old pony tails aren't just stories but the few bits and pieces that remained of the truth? The fables of monsters and intelligent races not like ponies are more then fiction...they are dying embers of a time before.
Note:Many, MANY thanks to Book Smart for helping me edit the first half of the chapters. Ther other half of my thanks go to one ProtheanBrony for doing the rest of the edits for the latter half of the chapters.BookSmartProtheanBrony
Human civilization ended on May 23, 2015, when everyone on earth became a pony. This is the story of how they lived, how they died, and what they achieved.
On May 23, 2015, the world ended. It wasn't violent, it wasn't bloody, and it wasn't even very dramatic. The entire population of the planet vanished. But they didn't stay gone; almost at once refugees started trickling back. Unfortunately for them, they didn't come back with their humanity intact.
Instead of a single species, the earth is now populated with Ponies, griffons, dragons, minotaurs, and even stranger creatures. What will the remnants of humanity make with their world? Will they remember human achievements, or slip back into primitive ignorance? Learn from our mistakes, or repeat them over and over?
People haven't really changed, only their bodies have. The world now comes with new threats, supernatural as well as mundane. Demons lurk beneath the sea, while strange spirits whisper promises in dreams. Empires rise, dictators control, and ponies have nowhere to turn for help. Nowhere except themselves, and old-fashioned hard work.
This story is effectively an anthology of episodes, each of which will focus on a different time period and different perspective characters.
Latest in the Last Pony on Earth series. If you haven't read that story, start there. This one won't really make much sense otherwise.
Editing provided by Two Bit and Sparktail. Art by the fantastic Zutcha.
Celestia and you engage in various forms of debauchery.
Celestia and you have been friends with benefits for a while now. Offhand, she mentions an invisibility charm, along with a couple other quite... useful spells. Lewd hijinks ensue.
Shameless clop. I'm literally not even gonna deny it.
Cover art made by Digitaldomain123.
Number 2045528, if you're interested.
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Featured 5/9/2019, Wow, that was quick!
Also got the hot symbol. Damn, didn't realise people would be this quick to praise the sun.
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Also from now on at the top of each chapter there will be fetish warnings if there are any particularly obtrusive ones in the chapter.
Leech wins a free vacation to a changeling hive and, of course, lewd shenanigans ensue.
It's just another normal day in Tekky's shop, until a changeling shows up with a curious proposition. The drone, named Copper, offers an all-expenses paid trip to his hive. Leech, never having really gone on a vacation before, leaps at the chance, disregarding Tekky's warning that it's some sort of scam. The mischievous unicorn quickly finds out that there are a few strings attached in regards to the trip...
Kinks include: Male on Female, Futa on Female, Threesome, Oral, Vaginal, Oviposition, Exhibitionism, Slight Bondage, and some Inflation
If anyone was wondering, this is sort of a side story in regards to my Tekky and Leech series.
Starlight Glimmer rewrote history, erasing the Sonic Rainboom and stranding Twilight in an Equestria that suffered one disaster after another until it was barely recognizable. Twilight has to act fast if she ever wants to see her home again.
Starlight Glimmer had the perfect plan: using Star Swirl's time travel spell, erase the Sonic Rainboom and everything it did. After failing to stop her, Twilight was returned abruptly to an Equestria that bears little resemblance to her home, where the other Elements of Harmony don't even know her name.
It should've been simple then: use Star Swirl's magic to return to the past and stop Starlight from changing things. Unfortunately for Twilight, all the magic in the Cutie Map is gone. She'll have to find another way to put Equestria right, and fast. After all, the Elements didn't stop Nightmare Moon...
This story is sponsored by Two Bit as a Patreon reward. If you'd like me to write your awesome story idea, that's the place. Cover by Zutcha.
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